Post 15 - Script feedback from Professional scriptwriter

Luckily in the course of writing our script for 'Run', through the links of our teacher we were able to not only send off our scripts to a professional script writer in Dudi Appleton, but we also had the chance to Skype him in person and receive feedback upon our script writing work. There is a link in Dudi's name to his kind of work.

None the less, it was great to receive constructive criticism and ideas on how to improve our script, below are notes in which Dudi himself added to the bottom of our script.

'Run' script with scriptwriter feedback

And upon receiving this feedback I took the privilege of talking to Dudi in person on Skype, I was the one out of my group who volunteered to make the call as my fellow 3 members were busy at the time of asking. Anyway I spoke to Dudi on Skype and recorded the conversation with 'Voice memos' on my iPhone.