"Run" Treatment
Gadebridge Park. Late evening. We open to see a large amount of zombies running franticly across the empty field, Drenched in blood with their organs protruding out of there decomposing bodies. Terrified, a group of 18 year olds run across the field screaming and fighting of the infected as they run. A girl Charlie becomes the focus of our attention as she uses brutally hits an infected zombie in the face with a bashed up baseball bat.
A guy falls to the ground, "Jacob" Charlie screeches as she sprints over to the boy lying on the ground as a group of the infected surround him. Charlie charges through the infected savagely beating them with the bat that she grasps firmly. She drops the bat as she grasps Jacobs hand and leads him away; they catch up with the rest of the group who are hiding in a nearby car park.
As they can hear the infected closing in around them the group begin to realise that they will not be able to escape this without sacrificing one of their own. The first survivor states that the oldest should sacrifice themselves and states that one of the older survivors should just be left here as bate. An argument breaks out between the group the noise from the argument begins to attract more and more of the infected. Throughout the argument Charlie stays deadly quiet as Jacob begins to attempt to defuse the situation but it is too late.
The infected zombies begin to mass around the group of survivors, they soon are overwhelmed. Charlie shouts and begins to lead the zombies away. Puzzled Jacob asks her what are you doing, He soon clocks on to what she is doing as his face drops and she tells him to run.
She is soon overwhelmed and the savage infected zombies begin to eat Charlie. Everything goes quiet as she is slowly eaten alive as watches Jacob and the others escape she closes her eyes and everything goes black.
This has the potential to be a great film is shot right. Your posts are becoming slightly reliant on Natasha's spider diagrams and her treatment. There is not enough evidence of work from you. It's great to see you are up-to-date, but I expect more from you this year than just that. Currently your blog is a D grade.
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So far there has been no information on genre as covered in the lesson. This is important and you can relate it back to your own idea.
Post 8 - very thin - mise en secene is a lot more than just props.
Your post is in desperate need of visuals. Come on Jack - sto taking the easy route all the time when you are capable of so much more.